User talk:Deshantm

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Cleanup?

Hey, would you mind cleaning/touching up Rapid Recovery Project? Please don't use first-person when writing an article :-) Thanks! — Ryan Lewis 14:15, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

I cleaned it up, but I think maybe that more contact will need to be added later. What do you think?

Well, I recommend that if you are going to just link to the project website (which is perfectly fine, no sense in documenting what has already been documented), just add a short overview of the project (i.e. the paragraph under "What is the Rapid Recovery System?" looks great!). — Ryan Lewis 19:32, 20 November 2007 (EST)